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Re: A song for my (ex) guy
I wrote this for my ex boyfriend when we had been going out about five and a half six months, and we broke up very recently and I never showed ...
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Re: I Need You To Write. - 2.
I've just read basically everything you've written, because you're style of writing is crazily addictive! There's nothing I would change about any of your 'I need you to write' series, ...
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Re: vaguely depressing lyrics..
thanks! Yeah I play sax and a bit of guitar, but i'm not really good enough to back songs on guitar.. It does appear broken up on my computer? :/ ...
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Re: Letters Chapter 1 & Prologue
" It's not you I miss it's us" I bloody love that line, apart from now it's made me sad.. i have a theory, when i was with luke, everything ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: Just this guy..
Yay someone replied! I love it when that happens :) Thanks for the suggestions, I promise I will try! I just hate editing lyrics after the initial draft, because I ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: vaguely depressing lyrics..
These are some lyrics I wrote a while ago... whilst one of my friends was having bad time with these kind of issues. please comment with respect, x first one ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: I missed having you in my bed.
I loved this so much when I read it at yours (: It's probably because I love Lexi so much though to be honest, nothing to do with your amazing ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: Angel's Mask (P. 2)
Very very good! It was so easy to read, very well written, and you've obviously put a lot of work into the editing because I couldn't find any grammatical/ spelling ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: Just this guy..
I'm putting on one of my shorter lyrics before I jump into the deep end with my long pieces.. please help me edit it! This was partly based on a ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: Love is blind
"Admittedly, unusual, before this point," I'm not sure the grammar in that sentence makes sense, or maybe just to make it read better you should leave out the first comma, ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: Nevada Falls
This coursework was the best one in our class ella. You're incredible at writing! I know it had to be short for the cw but I think you should lengthen ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: Keep the memory alive
Is this the contents of you're school planner by any chance? very very good xx
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: Wires
I don't know it still makes you cry... you didn't even know me or my family then! But yeah, it almost made me cry writing it. I can't sorry I ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: Fetus (1)
okay first off.. Are you still trying to make me cry? The thing which hit me most about this piece was the huge amount emotion that hit the reader, from ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: Letters Chapter 1 & Prologue
Wow ELla really loved this. I can't think of anything to say on how to improve it... but I'm sure Izzy will think of something! Really great, have you carried ...
Sep 8, 2009
